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If we look at what we have with the mindset that this is what God himself has provided for us at this time we can be thankful. We know that He has ultimately provided all that we own and who are we to complain?
Taking Us Home
by Don Iannone
This time we’re going back
To move forward
This time less will be more
Not more and more
This move will simplify
Clarify us inside out
Bring us into focus
Help us back home
We were getting painfully close
To losing what’s most important
Not money, what it buys
But what’s deep in our hearts
Hard times remind us
With some pain, what’s most precious
Certainly life itself
All it dreams
Taking Us Home
by Don Iannone
This time we’re going back
To move forward
This time less will be more
Not more and more
This move will simplify
Clarify us inside out
Bring us into focus
Help us back home
We were getting painfully close
To losing what’s most important
Not money, what it buys
But what’s deep in our hearts
Hard times remind us
With some pain, what’s most precious
Certainly life itself
All it dreams
Image size
3206x2401px 2.4 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 7D
Shutter Speed
1/1000 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Apr 15, 2012, 2:46:10 AM
Sensor Size
14mm
© 2012 - 2024 KanutoX
Comments16
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Overall Vision
Originality Technique Impactsorry for my bad english
wow... this picture is reminds me a Award Winning Photos in indonesia about homeless people. this is really sad. i love how you write the description.
we must be thankful. but People these day are not
just look at teenager these days.
they cursed they parents just because
they not give him/her a New Macbook , iPhone or Blackberry.
but i think if they looking something like this
maybe that can convince them.
so i Give Vision is 5 Star.
i love how you take this photos
they look so sad just giving us more
emotional feeling about this photo.
i give Originality 4 Points.
Technique is good. i love how you use
F 2.8 and 1/1000 in here. because the background
also giving a story if you blurred the background
maybe it will lose the story itself. and about the shutter
i love how you "freeze" this moments.
just feel like.. "hey man See this"
why i only give 4.5 not 5 ? because
the rule of third. if you cropped a bit on the right
side the object will be centerized and will give
more emotional feeling.
anyway this picture have a great impact
i recommend you to write some poems or something
for giving more "emotion" on this picture.